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junglewa
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Postby junglewa » Wed May 04, 2011 12:30 am

This is great! Thanks a lot for your hard work

cnhn
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Postby cnhn » Wed May 04, 2011 1:20 am

So here's the 1st chapter of Shin Dorei, or technically 11th chapter of Dorei Jokyoushi- series: http://www.mediafire.com/?6zvupzu34kezkl7

It's just the opening chapter but a gangbang already! Expect more :D .

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Now for some unrelated info about Hiraoka.
I just checked Action Pizazz SP 2011-06 lineup and found Hiraoka still continuing Samayoeru Koakuma-Tachi, which was absent from Pizazz SP 2011 04-05.
Apparently he's just taking a break. And we can see that it's on 6th chapter, if we use Dorei as a standard, then it will be 4 chapters more for it to get published as tankouboun.
But still no scan of it anywhere. I put a bounty on it on e-hentai (using credits I gained from uploading Ryeka and Dorei), but no claim so far.
I only found samples from Pizazz SP site.

Image

Still heavy on exhibitionism theme there 8)
Edit: fixing the pic link.

junglewa
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Postby junglewa » Thu May 05, 2011 12:47 am

Great chapter!
As for Action Pizazz, yeah I can't find it anywhere (I think I stumbled on your post about it in hongfire), it's really odd, not even dead links.

BTW, have you looked at Keno Yantaroh¿s work? Is more extreme but it does have some exhibitionism on it:

http://lofi.e-hentai.org/s/c45c1c36c8f8 ... g/37646-11

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Postby cnhn » Sat May 07, 2011 2:20 am

junglewa wrote:Great chapter!
As for Action Pizazz, yeah I can't find it anywhere (I think I stumbled on your post about it in hongfire), it's really odd, not even dead links.

BTW, have you looked at Keno Yantaroh¿s work? Is more extreme but it does have some exhibitionism on it:

http://lofi.e-hentai.org/s/c45c1c36c8f8 ... g/37646-11


Haha yeah, I tried asking about Pizazz in every place possible. Still no clear answer, though. And I've checked Keno Yantaroh, that's some old-school drawing there.

Anyway, chapter 12: http://www.mediafire.com/?1ic2v057i8fl7iv

Fun train ride. But not so fun for me. Too many out of box/bubble text on the second half (the train ride) to edit. I managed to redraw some but I just use my usual lazy trick for most. Oh well.

deedolito
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Postby deedolito » Sun May 08, 2011 9:38 am

Nice job, this chapter was a hard one.

cnhn
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Postby cnhn » Tue May 10, 2011 12:55 am

And chapter 13 is here: http://www.mediafire.com/?ob5afp263vfj3ic

English class is fun; but only true if your teacher is Fujishima...or Ryeka, or that one from Moral Hazard. Wonder why Hiraoka obsessed with English teacher :roll: .

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Postby junglewa » Tue May 10, 2011 1:00 am

cnhn wrote:And chapter 13 is here: http://www.mediafire.com/?ob5afp263vfj3ic

English class is fun; but only true if your teacher is Fujishima...or Ryeka, or that one from Moral Hazard. Wonder why Hiraoka obsessed with English teacher :roll: .


Thanks for your great work!

It seems to be a common trend in hentai that the english teachers are more, erm, loose.

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Postby cnhn » Sat May 14, 2011 10:18 pm

And here's chapter 14-15: http://www.mediafire.com/?cb5d7ryd5hsg6iz

Some hot yuri action there 8) .
BTW guys, do us a favor by pointing mistakes on translation or editing. We're not native speakers so if you think that some sentences sound awkward, or that there are better choice of words, please kindly tell your suggestion. The same with typo. I'll fix things when the whole volume complete.

deedolito
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Postby deedolito » Sun May 15, 2011 1:54 am

You make my day :D

iday12
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Postby iday12 » Sun May 15, 2011 11:15 am

cnhn wrote:And here's chapter 14-15: http://www.mediafire.com/?cb5d7ryd5hsg6iz

Some hot yuri action there 8) .
BTW guys, do us a favor by pointing mistakes on translation or editing. We're not native speakers so if you think that some sentences sound awkward, or that there are better choice of words, please kindly tell your suggestion. The same with typo. I'll fix things when the whole volume complete.

The majority of the typos I noticed were subject verb agreements or an extra article put in somewhere, mostly just small mistakes that didn't make that much of a difference.

If you want to be super picky:
(using the exh page numbers as reference, and corrections are in bold)

P. 10 (if you are talking about that one instance) -she... she's wearing no panties...
-Does she have no shame?

P. 12 -their curious looks
-all those looks

P14 -some students took pictures
-the other teachers didn't scold me

P17 -take out the "a" in "this is not a rape"

P18 -take out the "the" in "I'm the number one"
-what a perverted face you are making

P27 -how does my big dick feel?

P29 -I'm late for my first day
-Why the hell did you suddenly

P30 -she is showing everything

P31 -you accused me of being a bad teacher

P44 -lifting my skirt makes the boys excited

P54 -a world that is full of shame and pleasure

P56 -aren't you the president of the student council?

P65 -What will I have to do now? (contractions don't work if the order is switched)

P67 take out the "to" in "to the sex education committee"

P68 -she's been wet since this morning

P75 -you misspelled "crush" as "crish"

P77 -It's exciting to teach this girl sex techniques

P78 It should be "get wetter" rather than "get more wet"

cnhn
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Postby cnhn » Mon May 16, 2011 8:19 am

^Thanks, that's really helpful! I checked things twice or more before uploading it. And still got typo there. There's one on the previous chapter too, I didn't realize it until Malone pointed it out. I'm not really picky myself, but this manga is one of my favorite, so might as well doing it as best as I can.

Malone
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Postby Malone » Mon May 16, 2011 8:39 am

Thanks for the corrections.

I'd bet many of that mistakes happen because
cnhn tries to make the text shorter in order to fit it
in the bubbles. (I mean, when he uses "wears" instead of
"is wearing")

The extra articles is my fault. I'm from Spain and we use a lot
of articles. Bad habit.

We'll try to avoid that kind of errors in the future.

Anyway, check the next chapters out!

cnhn
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Postby cnhn » Wed May 18, 2011 2:02 am

Malone wrote:
I'd bet many of that mistakes happen because
cnhn tries to make the text shorter in order to fit it
in the bubbles. (I mean, when he uses "wears" instead of
"is wearing")


Not really, sometimes I just messed up LOL. Like the last example, "wetter" is shorter but I used "more wet" which is both incorrect and lengthy.

Anyway, here's chapter 16: http://www.mediafire.com/?4d36cpabzly2it9

I checked things thoroughly before uploading, hopefully no typo this time.

iday12
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Postby iday12 » Wed May 18, 2011 5:16 pm

P89 -that benefits both of us

P92 (I think it sounds better this way) -with all of the students in this school

P94 -so, every has touched her already?
(take out the a in) -wow, what a soft tits!
-This is like a dream I don't want to wake up! (this can either be two sentences with a ; after dream, or add "from" at the end to make it make sense)

P95 -Who's a bad teacher now?

P97 -Nobody tries to monopolize me. Nobody tries to force me

P100 -I can't wait for the after school lesson

P 102 -What is she doing now?

it almost seemed like you tried to take out unnecessary articles but ended up needing some instead, lol. And that's fine, if I had to translate something into spanish (which I take in school), I would probably mess up a lot more often. If you want, I can check the english script for small mistakes like these before you edit the manga so you don't have to go back and change it.

cnhn
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Postby cnhn » Wed May 18, 2011 6:20 pm

That would be helpful. Contact Malone via PM for the script. I'll send email to Malone about this too.


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